Tyrnair
Posts : 5
Age : 34
 | | Subject: Tyrnair's starter spells Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:47 am | |
| Spell Name: Angelic Blade
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: The light is gathered and solidified into a blade that runs along the sides of her arms. This deals sharp slashing style damage. She can use these in melee combat or manipulate them to launch at an opponent up to 2 meters away, a close ranged attack. Deals D ranked damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Spell Name: Holy Power shot
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Light is gathered with a gesture before condensing it and shooting it in a spherical motion towards the enemy. The sphere is about the size of a football and speeds with enough power to causing bruising and at times, knocking the air out someone's lungs. Moves at 5 m/s Deals D ranked damage
Duration: instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Spell Name: Blinding smite
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp (5mp sustained)
Type: offensive
Element: holy
Spell Effect: Light is gathered into a small two foot radius and launched upwards to about six feet high and created a blinding white pillar that will do D ranked damage to anyone who touches it. It is stationary and is great if a black out is to occur. It gives off a little warmth to those who are near it and if someone touches it, it can cause a slight burn, but nothing that some Aloe couldn't handle.
Duration: sustained, no longer than 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Spell Name: Spear of Heaven
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 mp
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Light is gathered and then projected in a spear like streak across the ground, striking the target like a thrown spear. It moves at 10 m/s and uses piercing style damage. Upon contact it makes a flash of light that causes spots to appear in someone's eyes for a brief moment in a three foot radius. Does C ranked damage.
Duration: instant
Cooldown: 3 posts
Spell Name: Smiting claws
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20mp (10 sustain)
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Light is manipulated and formed into claws around a single hand, dealing slashing melee damage. It looks like a large dragon claw it attached to her arm, though it only comes up to her elbow instead of enveloping her whole arm. Does C ranked damage and can be canceled early if she's hit too hard and looses focus. Or she trips and falls, which is equally as likely.
Duration: sustained
Cooldown: 3 posts | |
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Ares
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Posts : 34
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Tyrnair's starter spells Wed Feb 10, 2016 8:23 pm | |
| Hello Tyrnair! I'll be checking your application today! My comments will be in color after each spells. - Tyrnair wrote:
- Spell Name: Angelic Blade
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: The light is gathered and solidified into a blade that runs along the sides of her arms. This deals sharp slashing style damage. She can use these in melee combat or manipulate them to launch at an opponent up to 2 meters away, a close ranged attack. Deals D ranked damage.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
If the duration is instant, It means once casted it is done. Your magic seems more than an instant, since you said "used in melee combat". How long is the blades?
Spell Name: Holy Power shot
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 mp
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Light is gathered with a gesture before condensing it and shooting it in a spherical motion towards the enemy. The sphere is about the size of a football and speeds with enough power to causing bruising and at times, knocking the air out someone's lungs. Moves at 5 m/s Deals D ranked damage
Duration: instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Whatcha mean by "spherical motion"? Do you mean it moves in the motion of a sphere, or the light is condensed into the shape of a sphere?
Spell Name: Blinding smite
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10mp (5mp sustained)
Type: offensive
Element: holy
Spell Effect: Light is gathered into a small two foot radius and launched upwards to about six feet high and created a blinding white pillar that will do D ranked damage to anyone who touches it. It is stationary and is great if a black out is to occur. It gives off a little warmth to those who are near it and if someone touches it, it can cause a slight burn, but nothing that some Aloe couldn't handle.
Duration: sustained, no longer than 2 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
What type of D rank damage? Bruising or slashings? 1st degree burns?
Spell Name: Spear of Heaven
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 mp
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Light is gathered and then projected in a spear like streak across the ground, striking the target like a thrown spear. It moves at 10 m/s and uses piercing style damage. Upon contact it makes a flash of light that causes spots to appear in someone's eyes for a brief moment in a three foot radius. Does C ranked damage.
Duration: instant
Cooldown: 3 posts
Length of spear please. Spots in the eyes? As in minor blinding, or do I get a Sharingan? lol. Need to be specific to prevent metagaming.
Spell Name: Smiting claws
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20mp (10 sustain)
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Light is manipulated and formed into claws around a single hand, dealing slashing melee damage. It looks like a large dragon claw it attached to her arm, though it only comes up to her elbow instead of enveloping her whole arm. Does C ranked damage and can be canceled early if she's hit too hard and looses focus. Or she trips and falls, which is equally as likely.
Duration: sustained
Cooldown: 3 posts
Size please.
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